Thursday, 31 March 2011

Rough Cut Teacher Feedback

Front cover- The title of the magazine needs to go at the side and be bigger. There is also little text on the front cover, so more text in the bare spaces would make it better.
Contents Page- There needs to be more information on the contents page. There is a picture with a page number underneath, but it dosen't say who the artist is. Write about what the picture is representing (which story/artist).
DPS- The columns need to be equal and bigger text for the title. I need to write the name of the artist who the article is about on the page.

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